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The snow lashes at my face
Covering everything around me
Blinding me in the algid flurry
In this winter tempest, I lose myself
But your fire illuminates my way
As it surrounds me, and warms me to the core
Even this awful gale cannot put us asunder
The fire glows stronger and ever radiant
The storm dissipates
Drifting into a gentle snow
Where we can both play
Warm in each others arms at last
- by Danelle Dark Arts |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/14/2008 |
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- Title: Last the Snow
- Artist: Danelle Dark Arts
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Description:
When I was writing my poem, I was envisioning a girl walking along on Christmas, and getting caught in a snow storm. She feels like she will lose her way in the cold. Then a boy comes to warm her and shelter her from the storm.
The storm gives up, and they are left in a beautiful "winter wonderland" I guess you could say ^^;; Then they go and play and make snowmen and have snowball fights....and enjoy their Christmas together. Thats all they need.
***Im sorry if the font is hard to read*** - Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: last snow
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Comments (4 Comments)
- cookiebabie3 - 03/13/2009
- people say they cant read it, they are just screwed up bc you can!i love it its soooo well like real life!
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- sunshyn2008 - 02/23/2009
- yes i agree tooooo bright cant read it wayyyyyy tooooo bright lighten it up a little geese
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- blackbearhamsters - 01/29/2009
- TOO BRIGHT... CANT'T READ THIS POEM!!!!!!
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- ShadeLurker - 12/16/2008
- It's good :3 I like te vocabulary and imagery that you used.
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