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As the white lushed snow fell from the tip of the pined christmas tree, it disappeared in to the ground.
As he stepped into the hard cold snow, his feet felt numb.
He reached his pale cold palm out.
Grabbing the bitter cold snow into his palm he formed a ball.
He lifted the ball over his head and tilt his head back.
Look at the circle object he made reflected to the sun's rays.
He tossed it into one hand,
Leaning his right arm streached out in a perfect straight line,
He threw the cold snow into the imaginary target
The Ball hit the ground,
And disappeared into the white field.
- by Ochitsuita |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/14/2008 |
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- Title: The snow
- Artist: Ochitsuita
- Description: Basically the poem is about a boy making a snow ball. ><
- Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: snow
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Comments (4 Comments)
- xKylexSparklezx - 02/02/2011
- nice 1
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- Alleytastic - 05/24/2009
- I don't know why the girl below me said that poems had to rhyme, i've never written a rhyming poem in my life. They are so much less forced that way. Anyway, this is really good and has some great imagery.
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- Kveykva - 05/08/2009
- i love it!
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- KLTC - 01/19/2009
- It's realy sweet, but don't poems have to rhym?
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