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The best time of Winter
Is when the flakes fall gently
It is beautiful.
- Title: Winter Snow
- Artist: Danbi-ssi
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Description:
it's a haiku, so if you like it, please vote
if you don't, oh well - Date: 12/11/2008
- Tags: winter haiku
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Danbi-ssi - 12/30/2009
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@darkness-no, it's 5, 7, 5
@ kun- I know, I know
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- Darkness_Spreader - 12/07/2009
- first line is 1 syllable long. but othrwise, good.
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- hubti - 07/01/2009
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cool haiku
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- Kun-Evo - 02/22/2009
- It's short because it's a haiku. 5,7,5. Nicely done. The last line doesn't quite fit in though. Good luck.
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- Roleplaying mule OwO - 12/20/2008
- LOL, that poem is short
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- KING CHOMPY5 - 12/12/2008
- haha its short.... HI YUUKI!!!!!
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