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  • Title: the grudge duh
  • Artist: HUNTOKAR
  • Description: yeah i didn't get a good mouth for it, but whatever
    i had fun making this
    my comp spazzes and won't put in reference images sorry bout that
    but if your too lazy to just go use google shame on you
    i dont want any comments on lack of referance image i dont mind comments that are constructive critisism if you know a better item fro my cosplay let me know kayyyy
  • Date: 10/29/2012
  • Tags: grudge
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • HUNTOKAR - 11/12/2012
  • tthanks you for those excellent suggestions i will definitly get to work on that as soon as i can!
  • ngaurhoth1 - 11/11/2012
  • A different white skin would look better. Yours has tints of blue rather than straight-up gray. You could use the masterpieces as a cheaper but still effective alternative, though you'd probably have to use an eye mod.

    I cannot comment on the dress because I am not seeing very many good full body references.
    Also whether you disable comments or not, you will still get 1's for no reference picture. It is a de facto rule of the arenas. Even a link in the descriptions will suffice for most people
  • kittykonataizumi - 11/11/2012
  • @Doctor Biplizard: aaaaah okies sorry i never really seen either the ring or the grudge so im not sure on what the differances are ^^;;
  • Leader Mizuki - 11/11/2012
  • Hmm. No reference picture and the title of the avatar seems a bit rude. We could think it was someone completely different instead of the grudge. She has eyes that are visible, and well, everything just seems off. The hair is cute, and the dress should be plainer instead of something that appears elegant. A mouth may be better too. 1/5. It just feels off.
  • Colonel Speedo - 11/11/2012
  • It's a good effort, i'll 4/5 it. But she is looking a bit more like Sadako from The Ring than Kayako, which people might be getting confused over.
    Maybe adding Count's Vengeance for a little blood could work? And a plainer dress too since her's is more like a hospital gown.

    And Kittykonataizumi, The Grudge has nothing to do with a TV. You're thinking of The Ring.
  • kittykonataizumi - 11/10/2012
  • you tried your best i'll give you that .though there are a few things you could do to your entry that could make it better like adding the tv and blood to make it look more scary, like she is suppossed to be cause of her background as an evil spirit out for revenge. . 3.

    i give you 2.5/5 for good effort.

    and remember to add the referance also for your next entry~ :3
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