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- Title: Golden Rain
- Artist: Breevee Magica
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Description:
Cascading waterfalls of golden rain,
Fall upon the Earth in a playful way.
Its golden sparkles shine like bright baby suns,
Restless, as they come undone.
They skip and jump and hop,
Their whistling voices leap
Into the bluest sky one has ever seen.
But alas, this sunny day is almost done.
That starry night has won.
Their smiles fade.
Until you say:
“Do not worry; we will have more bright and rainy days.” - Date: 04/26/2009
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Comments (7 Comments)
- NiccaWoodStar - 04/28/2009
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Love it. ^^ You used the shoes (forgot the name >.< wink nicely and not many can do that. Good job! I'll give you a 5!
Good luckies, Broken Nightmares! - Report As Spam
- Breevee Magica - 04/28/2009
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Thank you for all your wonderful comments! :3
and for those you were wondering. Yes the poem is an original that was written by me. :] - Report As Spam
- emmere - 04/28/2009
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i hope to see this in the winner's circle next week.
it's really pretty. is the poem original? - Report As Spam
- b o n n a b y - 04/28/2009
- Beautiful coordination. Adore the use of little purses, tunic and water splash on the ground. Good luck!
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- princessohhsocute4567 - 04/28/2009
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nice
it would have looked nicer if you got an angelic pendant or the demonic pendantt
4/5
nice job =] - Report As Spam
- Forgotten Potential - 04/28/2009
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Cute colors and it's so beautiful. <<; ~
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- Panda-senpai - 04/28/2009
- Wonderful description! Pretty, too. 5/5
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