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- Title: ☠ Don't Be Fooled ☠
- Artist: Jamais Changeant
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Description:
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Come to my circus!
Step up, see my show.
Magic surrounds us,
Only I know...
There's nothing to fear!
Come in and sit back.
Be entertained here;
Step up to the track.
It couldn't be true...
The show of a lifetime!
No, I wouldn't deceive you,
Not with such nice rhymes!
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Inspired by a mixture of Dr. Facilier, Professor Screw-eye and Alice in Wonderland.
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Comments always appreciated! - Date: 07/31/2011
- Tags: circus clown fool magic
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Jamais Changeant - 08/06/2011
- How do you figure? Every other line rhymes in each stanza...
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- Sunset Shadows - 08/06/2011
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The poem is...creative, but only the first stanza rhymes.
I still like it, though.
c:
I give it a 4/5 - Report As Spam
- Prosaiche - 08/05/2011
- 5/5'd it <3 return the favor after the 8th?
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- Mrs_Sophie_Pendragon - 08/04/2011
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so creative,
it looks AMAZING!
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- Ace Fehrs Mule - 08/03/2011
- First place. No joke, this is gonna win.
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- [K!ng] - 08/03/2011
- That looks so cool with a great thematic presentation. Surely you will win this week!
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- xl Cyanide Candy lx - 08/03/2011
- Pretty sure Johnny Depp as Willy Wonka just got replaced. > u< I can't even begin to express how amazing this is.
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