- by Haydn Phoenix |
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- | Submitted on 02/10/2008 |
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- Title: melodic chaos
- Artist: Haydn Phoenix
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Description:
_Life,
____Raging and burning around me
_______Like a wildfire
_Everything and everyone
____I've ever loved
_______Going down in flames.
_My music, it soothes,
____Temporarily relieving the pain...
_______Never forever.
_The raven guides me
____Granting me wisdom and direction.
_______He keeps me safe.
_A locket from my daughter
____her picture masks my grief
_______And I smile.
_Surrounded by chaos.
____I have to remember the life
_______I could have had
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ - Date: 02/10/2008
- Tags: creamcapri silverlocket blackdressboot rainzebrawrap summoningtomepoe
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Karen Camacho - 02/05/2008
- interesting... I don't understand it though
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- gbbs bann ADMlN - 02/05/2008
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cute!
good job hun,
and i like your poem,
very
nice(:
8/10 - Report As Spam
- lovelezzdoll - 02/05/2008
- ^__^
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- Prinzess-Ice - 02/05/2008
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wow it is the best of all o.o i think it was a lot
of work... - Report As Spam
- Eletric Purple Cobra - 02/04/2008
- ...random! 10
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- Crimson Uchiha - 02/04/2008
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The story was good, but it didn't really match the
avitar. Maybe without the city under your feet
would've looked better. 8/10 - Report As Spam
- i Shiro Kitsune - 02/04/2008
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I'll give you a 10, because of all the chaos and
you have a crow!! A crow allways is the key fact
to chaos!! So yea, it's good!! - Report As Spam