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- Title: Concrete Angel
- Artist: Stevie-jean
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Description:
"...Her Statue Stands in a Shady Place,
An Angel Girl with an Upturned face.
Her Name is Written on a Polished Rock,
A Broken Heart that the World Forgot.
Through the Wind and the Rain,
She Stands Hard as a Stone
In a World that She Can't Rise Above.
But Her Dreams Give Her Wings
And She Flies to a Place Where She's Loved.
Concrete Angel..." - Date: 03/16/2009
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Comments (6 Comments)
- LunarCookies - 03/27/2009
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I like it
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- iAngelofDarknesss - 03/26/2009
- looking good, I would suggest something on the eyes but well done :] 5/5
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- Y o u k a i S e n p a i - 03/23/2009
- I agree with Platteh it needs a few angelic bits added to it ... but overall I like your attempt, keep trying :3
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- Stevie-jean - 03/22/2009
- Ok, so i'm a little limited for cash =/ But any helpful comments are appreciated =] And they're song lyrics, it's one of my favs
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- Display Inventory - 03/22/2009
- Wheres the halo? The hair is a guy's hair... You should have replaced the hair with a hair more angelic. Wheres her wings? And the Spring Nymph didn't go to well with the whole avi.
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- SashaAthena - 03/22/2009
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O ttht's so cute!! I love the poem!!! I totally give u a 5 hehe love it!!
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