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- | Submitted on 09/18/2008 |
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- Title: The Wondering Savior
- Artist: demoncorrupter
- Description: Theirs a tale about a man who goes around the countryside helping people in need, he doesn't let anyone get him down, he acts negative all the time but its just to hide is positive upbeat attitude if you manage to see this person who never stays in the same place say "hi" he'll do nothing and look like he don't care but underneath it all, he really truly does, you'll only see this passionate side when your in dire need, but only for a split second...
- Date: 09/18/2008
- Tags: wandering savior
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Comments (1 Comments)
- horn_diva - 09/28/2008
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1) periods are your friends. Use them more often please.
2) Wandering, not wondering.
3) the story is confusing, even without the punctuation issues, but the avatar itself has some potential. Spend some time on it, tweak it, and bring it back later, i think it might do well. 2/5. - Report As Spam
