- by magpie41792 |
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- | Submitted on 11/30/2008 |
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- Title: Avengful Girl
- Artist: magpie41792
- Description: Coming thro the portal she just made, she thought of how she and the rest of the girls in her village were going to save the men and boys that had been taken away just to keep them from rebelling in the growing war. Well, she thought, they were wrong...we will fight for them... She smiled as the others came...
- Date: 11/30/2008
- Tags: avengful girl jungle village knife
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Comments (7 Comments)
- iGenocidal - 12/02/2008
- i like it because the avatar is supposed to represent the story and it does that well enough
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- My Lady Gray - 12/02/2008
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Okay, a few things:
First: The plant. What?
Second: The smile. No. Just-no. If she is 'vengeful' then wouldn't she be grim?
Third: Sets, not such a good idea.
Four: Kinda cheap, no? Rule of thumb that has served me well: If more then 2 items (not counting hair ^_-) cost less then the 1k entry fee, try again.
All-in-all, 3/5, for a good try. - Report As Spam
- ll Peter Pan Collar ll - 12/02/2008
- i can't c ur right arm and the plant has nothing to do with this and a bit to cluttered 3/5
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- magpie41792 - 12/01/2008
- oh yeah...i am deleting all rude comments and any1 who cusses...that is big rude...
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- magpie41792 - 12/01/2008
- IM SORRY IF MY AVI HAS CHEEP STUFF!..AND I HAVE ELF SKIN...AND A CRAZY SHORT STORY THAT POPPED IN2 MY HEAD!..IT DOES NOT MEAN I AM EVIL!..i could not think of a better name 4 the thing...i had like 2 more mins b4 the thing closed again...
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- RaptorFlare - 12/01/2008
- cool 9/10
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