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- | Submitted on 07/01/2007 |
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- Title: rinki
- Artist: Sora_Rox12
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Description:
my first time so plz be nice.
one of my people from my story her name is rinki.She loves Demyx but no one knows.she is riku's sister.she is dating saix.sora loves her.
plz be nice. - Date: 07/01/2007
- Tags: pinkheartsbunny blackstraplessbra blacknettop outlawbikerpantscoal coolstarterboots
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Yaymeimashi - 06/27/2007
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Ok, about your description...First of all,
PROOFREAD IT! You are about to be in 7th grade, so
you should know how to form complete sentences,
including capalization and spacing. You made
run-on sentences as well. At least you spelled
everything right. Peoples' names should be
capitalized as well. Also, your "story" or
description or whatever that is supposed to be
doesn't make any sense at all. For people that
don't know it's kingdom Hearts related, they're
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- Yaymeimashi - 06/27/2007
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Ok, first off, I'm only voting high cuz you're my
sister. But I should be giving you a 4 or 5 to be
a fair voter. First off, it's plain. Lose the
mimzy, because it's baby-ish for the avi. It
doesn't even match. The shoes, nevermind the fact
they're starter boots, don't match the outfit in
color. The pants are cute, and I like the top, but
it's a bit plain. You should add earrings or
something like that, too. Bracelets would work, in
silver, because silver loo - Report As Spam
- Sinful Fool - 06/27/2007
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that's intersting.......i'll gove you a 7 for
being my little sister, but it really deserves
about a 5 or 6. no offense. don't kill me. i love
you little sister. - Report As Spam
- pressing150270 - 06/27/2007
- so well-done
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- JohnJohn123 - 06/27/2007
- good luck
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- country812191 - 06/27/2007
- this is cute!
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- Mikki Li - 06/27/2007
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