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- | Submitted on 08/16/2009 |
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- Title: Torn Apart
- Artist: SashaAthena
- Description: This girl... Who has been beaten, thrown, hurt, torn, and made fun of. She doesn't know what else to do for herself... The world is crashing down on her... as her heart is slowly trying to beat in the caged environment it is in now... she cries.... for the pain is to much for her to bare.. someone must be out there. someone must know how to help her... she is slowly dying... wishing on her guardian to come and guide her.. howevr she cannot find him....
- Date: 08/16/2009
- Tags: torn apart shattered hurt thrown
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Comments (7 Comments)
- ChynaKaeCuppycake - 09/18/2009
- hey sasha i love it
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- M I Y O I I - 08/23/2009
- lol. I think your avi is cute...however..it could use a little more depressing colors. Like black, uhm white and lots of grey. But that's just me. Any ways overall I think its good.
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- le norm - 08/23/2009
- thats really cute
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- ValentineEvenings - 08/23/2009
- Her clothes are too bright. You should've used something that would've highlighted the theme of sadness. The description was pretty good.
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- TankBuilder - 08/23/2009
- WOW i would give it 5/5 but that is so sad i started crying my key board broke and i had to get a new one and on my way there i creid so much theres a new lake by wawa
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- Utsukushii Tora - 08/23/2009
- so sad... yet i love it.
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- EnigmaticSilhouette - 08/23/2009
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Wow...Nice job...5/5 for imagination and a good deep story...
In which your story reminds me of how I used to be... - Report As Spam
