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- | Submitted on 09/29/2009 |
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- Title: STARS
- Artist: ToastyMuffen
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Description:
star
alone star
shining, twinkling, moving
just being what you are;
star alone star
though watching minds make of you a meaning
a wish, or a symbol
but alone star you are simply what you are;
star alone star
unlike men, women
unlike intelligence that must form and associate
who must be this or that
conditioned and grown and nurtured
and shaped
and programmed;
but you star
alone star
not like this or that
but simply natural, what you are
- Date: 09/29/2009
- Tags: stars
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Comments (7 Comments)
- xX Lost Illusion Xx - 10/12/2009
- Change the kiki slippers to kottan bell boots and it'll be perfect.
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- IMoonDancer - 10/11/2009
- ditch the slippers and then it's perfect but until then 4/5
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- CoreyD123 - 10/11/2009
- its definitely the best ive ever seen on here yet. the only thing that dosent fit are the slippers but still totaly a 10/10
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- La Vindsi - 10/10/2009
- I love your discroption so prettyfull!!
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- Zypt - 10/10/2009
- nicw avy
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- darling shivar - 10/10/2009
- you did well until I saw the feet. 4/5
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- Melonpaan - 10/08/2009
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that must've been expeeensive
do you still get prize money for winning the arena or just fame?
in any case 5/5!!
i wish i could vote higher - Report As Spam
