- Title: The shadow of Moonlight forest
- Artist: Applezero
- Description: The mysterious Ninja, appears in the darkness at the midnight hour stalking his next victim, searching to kill anyone foolish enough to go into the moonlight forest at night any that go in Die, the villagers warned you, but you did not believe the legend and trying to disprove the legend. You went into the forest. suddenly, you see a black figure emerge from above you, your skin goes pale you feel a sharp pain and you fall down in a pool of your own blood the screen goes black.
- Date: 10/19/2009
- Tags: doom ninja darkness japanese shadow
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Applezero - 11/02/2009
- and i was refering to the other person that commented
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- Applezero - 11/02/2009
- yeah thx
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- iamsocrazy25 - 11/01/2009
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@Blaze of Light - If you can't take constructive criticism, you shouldn't enter in the arenas. Amara's comment was constructive, and not once did she say anything bad. I understand your frustration with the epic fail comments, but just ignore them. You did your best. Next time you go to enter, think about what people said and MAKE IT DIFFERENT. If you want to win, then try HARDER.
It's a great idea, but it could use a little work. Keep those creative juices flowing! <3 - Report As Spam
- Xx Petals On The Wind xX - 10/31/2009
- You can't really see that he has a kunai, though. I didn't notice it until I read your last comment =P I like the avatar itself, but I find the fire really clashes with it. I know you have other reds in there, but they're of a much darker shade. But I do like it, and the description is very good.
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- Applezero - 10/29/2009
- the theme is a mysterious ninja which are why theand also the freaking hood is good as it is the other one is a noob hood and ya the ninja sword is stupid looking and seriously he has a kunai thats the main thing and to the persons comment i deleted shut up im gettingtired of hearing epic fail andall that junk seriously
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- Amara Hayada - 10/28/2009
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I have a good reason why the rating is dropping: nothing flows. I really looks like a mismatch of various pieces that just don't fit too well together. The hood is out of place, you probably could have used a better one. The clothes are alright, but maybe you could have used a darker background piece. The fire doesn't go with anything; I would have used any ninja-weapon item out there instead.
Try fitting the theme a little more and it will help.
I hope this comment helps; good luck. - Report As Spam
