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- | Submitted on 02/23/2010 |
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- Title: Angel of Snow
- Artist: Momoko and Yousuke
- Description: Submitting again for advice. Constructive criticism only! Flames will be removed!
- Date: 02/23/2010
- Tags: angel snow
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Momoko and Yousuke - 03/23/2010
- Currently I couldn't afford a different halo.
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- Aidoru Lover - 03/06/2010
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* white, not blue..
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- Aidoru Lover - 03/06/2010
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Okay.
@ninja-no-ryo.
Yes, your right. I dont see much effort in this. Arms=EMPTY. The dress? the dress SUCKS. You could have used like, a shirt and a botton (blouse and skirt, possibly?) And added the item "Cloud". The halo is a wind halo. Not a snow halo, you could have used another halo, (uhm, forgot the name Dx) and a smile, please? Btw- halo is blue. Not white.. - Report As Spam
- ninja-no-ryu - 03/02/2010
- The halo sticks out, in a bad way. There's nothing else on the avatar in that color, I'd remove it. Some gloves would look nice... Perhaps adding more of that blue elsewhere in the outfit would look good. Other than that.... The theme is rather tired and overused.
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- roselle200 - 03/02/2010
- i love it!!
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- Undistinguished - 03/01/2010
- Something on/in arms plz. Minor details... eyes, waist, or floor? Something to spice.
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