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  • Title: Teal Eyes
  • Artist: Soul of The Wind
  • Description: Eyes, so bright and teal
    Penetrating deeply into my heart
    How should I feel?
    When they break me apart

    Eyes, so beautiful and alluring
    Yet my heart resists
    So full of love, and assuring
    Yet my heart desists

    Eyes, so teal and bright
    Why do you torment me?
    When you come to sight
    All my senses floatingly flee
    Oh, if I had the might
    Then I would open my eyes and see
    That your beauty is plunging me into blight
    As I observe those eyes
    Under fierce scrutiny

    -'Teal Eyes' Leke Loshi
  • Date: 03/21/2010
  • Tags: teal eyes matching
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Lady Moofy - 03/24/2010
  • When I first saw this, I thought it was simply amazing. However, I did manage to find a few things that threw me off a bit, if you don't mind... They're mostly issues with the reds, which, to me, mostly don't match. The bows on the feet seem a bit too dark, the hair chopsticks look kind of pinkish, and the red from the Reve Rouille waist thing is too bright for the other reds, besides the chopsticks... Even so, it's definitely top ten worthy~
    Sorry for sounding like such a critic ^^;;
  • XDnessaDX - 03/22/2010
  • omg my avi has teal eyes smile cute <3 please rate back!
    my avatar submission is called Starmony Freak biggrin
    TYTYTY
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