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- Title: Dare to Spy A Dragon
- Artist: Trillium_Fae
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Description:
Over shifting sands and the howling wind
You hear the ominous roar.
Resolute, you land and remained determined
To face your fear once more.
You lift your goggles, despite the sand's sting,
To see one last time with your own eyes
The desert dragon, a monstrous king,
Before taking once more to the skies. - Date: 04/18/2010
- Tags: dragon fantasy compass desert steampunk
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Dylan Corrao - 04/22/2010
- Thanks so much for the advice! Love the concept, although kind of bland. 5/5
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- IIIJenos HazardIII - 04/21/2010
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5/5
but minor adjustments
lose the wings
add a mask
n need a weapon
but i'm sure u'll make it to the finals
5/5
rate back?
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- Trillium_Fae - 04/21/2010
- When I put the wings down I lose em behind the shirt. I thought it showed the avi about to take off again after daring to catch a glimpse. Thanks for your input! 3nodding
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- Treeleg - 04/21/2010
- i think that would look good with the wings down...just my opinion but i like the gogh reed hat thing...overall i say 5/5 ^^
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- Chandler The Mermaid - 04/21/2010
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Thanks Trillium, that was sorta the llook I was going for.
Rting back a 5! Lovely concept btw! - Report As Spam
- Adelais Aer - 04/21/2010
- Thanks for the comment and the rating! biggrin I rated you 5/5, so good luck.
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- Trillium_Fae - 04/20/2010
- Downvoters! Please leave comments too so I can know what I need to improve? sweatdrop
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