- by Froggie Doll |
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- | Submitted on 06/15/2010 |
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- Title: Untill Death do us apart...
- Artist: Froggie Doll
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Description:
So pure was our love,
as sweet as the flowers.
The sun so bright above,
the day that was ours.
Almost by your side,
just a few steps away.
My eyes opened wide,
my breath went away.
The floor hit my head,
my blood cold as ice.
The tears that you shred,
the fear in your eyes.
You'll marry this spring,
with that girl called 'Lis'.
But remember one thing;
you owe me that kiss.
Don't you blame me,
if Lis would fall too.
Because, my dear, you see,
'Forever Me and You'... - Date: 06/15/2010
- Tags: untill death apart
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Comments (7 Comments)
- creativechick11 - 06/26/2010
- amazing description and story!! very spooky and creepy. the avi is ok- but i am only giving u a 5/5 because of your very unique and descriptive poem! great job =)
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- The True Prince - 06/26/2010
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It is actually very nice.
And it's not like just simple wedding items.
So 5/5
Love the story BTW - Report As Spam
- xLady Blakeneyx - 06/26/2010
- Well, that was unexpected. My nickname is 'Lis'. HAHA.
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- Coffed - 06/25/2010
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Lovely description. Mind rating me back next week?
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/gaia/original-avatar/vote/?entry_id=102200107#title
Also haha sorry if its too much to ask but could you
vote for me this week also? ^^
Much appreciated if you did.
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/gaia/cosplay-avatar/vote/?entry_id=102183355 - Report As Spam
- Fuurin Hime - 06/22/2010
- A heart-touching description. The avatar suits it very well, too. Good luck!
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- DEEDINO - 06/21/2010
- i really like your description. i totally understood it. Sad but good. 5/5
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- Amanda-ROCK IS NOT DEAD- - 06/21/2010
- hmmm very interesting. beautiful poetry. creative and really awesome! 5/5
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