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  • Title: The Light in the Night
  • Artist: Curious Cathryn
  • Description: Shes a lurker of the night;
    the bright bright light.
    She lumes and eludes
    the black to white.

    She is a whisper;
    one that cant be heard.
    But if your in the dark
    She will be there; just say the word

    (was kinda going for a little kingdom hearts style)
  • Date: 10/02/2010
  • Tags: light night poem lurker elude
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • ChaosandTranquility - 10/09/2010
  • wow. Awesome. I also like the description, which btw, maybe you could give me some tips. I write poetry, but it's usually related to my emotion. I'd like to write without it always being that way. I also want to learn how to write sonnets but I'm not quite sure o.o
  • Chained_Together - 10/08/2010
  • 5/5 thanks for voting for me! umm just a suggestion silver laurels (white tree in background) but I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! nice description too omg! that hat is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 55555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555!
  • Curious Cathryn - 10/08/2010
  • The lantern is suppose to be unmatching with the rest of the avi because it's suppose to stand out and be the main focus point of the avi. :p (description) xD
  • I Ssa dab os si Siht I - 10/07/2010
  • I like the idea and avi! smile but you're a bit off in the bottom, I suggest blue-ish socks or some anklets. hhmmm maybe some light yellows to throw in there too? The light of the lantern kind of throws it off. I really like this though, good luck! 4/5
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