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  • Title: Jet the Kitten Star v2
  • Artist: Owlie
  • Description: Made to match the Jet dolls. Comments and constructive criticism please <3

    Ended at 6th place! Thanks for your votes!
  • Date: 04/07/2011
  • Tags: kitten star black purple blue
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Blackdragon0228 - 04/19/2011
  • This is cute. i have some gripes with it tho. u did pretty good matching, i love the colors and all but i dont like some of the items u used 2 match. i hate that umbrella. if ur trying 2 match the dolls that was unnecessary. u need a bit more blue in u and i dont like the hat. it feels 2 big and clunky on this avi.
  • Pikachew - 04/18/2011
  • The black boots have a very solid dark streak in theme that isn't balanced well enough on the rest of the avatar. You're trying to match the jet dolls so they don't count as a blue item on the body. I'm not talking about white/blue. I'm talking about the more saturated blue that is seen in the fins and skirt. Your arms look bare because you put gray on gray which doesn't make sense. By bare I mean it's all one color.
  • Owlie - 04/18/2011
  • I used the skin so that the white on the arm would match the white in the corset and boots. The umbrella is gorgeous and I love the detail. The black in the boots matches the black in the Lumiere Noire moon. Actually, there are 6 blue items: The jet dolls (which I count as one since they're the same), Dance of the Sugarplum Fairy, Drop Necklace, Yemaya's Pearl, Lunar Hairpin and Gogh Reed. My arms aren't bare, I'm wearing black gloves.

    Look closer before you criticize, please.
  • Pikachew - 04/18/2011
  • There is too much black. You need items to match the very dark streak in your boots. The skin seems like a cop-out and the depressing umbrella paired with the top hat is awkward because the hat is too tall. You only used two items to get the blue colors in which isn't enough. You can make up for that by covering your bare arms. The boots ruin any chance you had of adding blue down there. The heck? Why do you have demon horns? People do this all the time. Adding expensive items for no reason.
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