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- Title: Goodbye, Father, I'll miss you
- Artist: Vanity Spectrum
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This is about a young girl at the age of, 14.Her father had to go back to Japan because he is a samurai; he needed to go back to his old Dojo. But suddenly, an earthquake occurred. The young girl had no choice but to visit him after the terrible incident. Her father died because of the earthquake. The girl cried for days. She visited her father's gravestone and gave the beautiful flowers to his gravestone.
- Date: 06/26/2011
- Tags: goodbye father sadness girl
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- Vanity Spectrum - 07/03/2011
- Thank you very much Hoshika Samurakami! I'm even touched by even reading it again. T^T
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- ImNotAllSmilesAndSunshine - 07/03/2011
- its very touching and sad. 5/5
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- Ana Claire Parks - 06/29/2011
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Nice! <3 5/5
Please rate mine when it finishes submission phase. =]
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- Vanity Spectrum - 06/29/2011
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So she wore it to let her father from the dead to see her finally wore the dress. But, her father wanted her to cheer up but he tried to tell her," Daddy's here, don't cry honey." But the words wouldn't come out, only chirps did. But, you'll always know that the person you love will always watch over you.
The end
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I hope it answers all your questions!
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- Vanity Spectrum - 06/29/2011
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Thank you, I couldn't fit the whole entire story because of the limit of words! Let me finish off the story.
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Her father was the legendary samurai.But he kept that a secret from his family.He disguise himself as just a normal father.Also, he was immortal.So, he turned himself as a golden bird; leaving his human body.The way she dresses is because the dress her father bought her but, never wore it because she had a chance to. - Report As Spam
- .M i s a k i - c h i. - 06/29/2011
- I like how you conveyed your theme, but I didn't uunderstand some of the items that I felt did little but detract from it, for example the teddy balloon and phoenix. I also question her hat. The way she is dressed up, if she wasn't wearing a Love Hurts she'd look pretty cheerful. But it ha s character. :3
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