- Title: Boundary of the Sky
- Artist: cosmere
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Description:
Luminescent shadow, wise and diligent,
Forsaken by even the most minute life,
Lost upon exit of an eon of progress.
And does it not exist if it was never seen,
Never heard? Ringing in eyes, through ears
Vacillate- empty in that claw breaking
Sort of way.
Adrift in insipid water,
At the boundary of the sky-
Remainders, reminders of a beauty
Never again to be seen.
- Date: 02/10/2013
- Tags: boundary shadow luminescent
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Anabaena - 02/19/2013
- Congratulations! I hoped this would win! wink
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- cosmere - 02/18/2013
- thanks for all your comments and feedbacks ^^
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- 2_twins in a ball - 02/18/2013
- Congratulations! *throws confetti yum_puddi
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- kinnykins - 02/18/2013
- holy sweet jesus that is awesome T^T
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- Kuyusi - 02/17/2013
- I love this so much. Avatar surrealism at its best. The face is the best part, I just can't stop staring into her eyes! *w*
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- Coma and Tail - 02/17/2013
- This is more than a fan fav. Everything that touches the sky has moved itself onto the soul of the person below it... And it made a magnificent story.
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- 2_twins in a ball - 02/15/2013
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The colors are an accompaniment, as others have said, to the background. However, the mix of bronze gold and yellow gold seems a bit distracting and the lantern doesn't really give a feel of movement. 4/5
Nevertheless, this entry will look intriguing- it just needs some touch-ups! wink - Report As Spam
