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Living in a world so cold...<br />
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~~~ Can you save me from myself...~~~~<br />
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Wasting away...<br />
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~*Suddenly*~<br />
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About me you ask so suddenly<br />
What to say and what to do<br />
So many things to answer<br />
But I have my own questions true<br />
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There’s no one quite like me <br />
Unique in my very own way<br />
Just like everyone else in this world<br />
I love the butterflies to play<br />
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Honest I may be and all<br />
But we all have a past<br />
Life is so complicated<br />
Its like a skit and cast<br />
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Movies we all wish were real<br />
And books that are so beautiful<br />
Music lifts every heart to soar<br />
For angels can be a bit vengeful<br />
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The rain loves to dance under<br />
For my feet and toes love puddles<br />
The moon and sun both lovely<br />
And sunset and sunrise befuddles<br />
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Smile with tears and a soul<br />
For I have so many words to say<br />
Over whelming yet understanding<br />
This could be the end and may<br />
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So many questions to listen<br />
And I have not all of the answers<br />
With finger tips its time to change<br />
To move beyond all cancers<br />
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Though you asked about me so suddenly<br />
These times have come to leave<br />
Whisper to me gently and softly<br />
For no one I wish to deceive. <br />
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Living in a world so cold...<br />
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~~~ Before the end and ever...~~~~<br />
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Wasting away...<br />
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this is a weird
poem about a
girl/boy who is
at the beach on
a very very
very hot day
and slept arou - dreaming a cl...
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this poem is
weird so please
at least gimmie
a 1 rating! - sweet hot Summer
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Comments (13 Comments)
- TiggerIsMyCat - 01/31/2009
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Thank you for reviewing/complementing my "Defense of the Wood"!
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- vampirekay1 - 01/28/2009
- thanks for comenting my song "why?" and i agree with you
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- mexicantacos2003 - 01/25/2009
- If I seem harsh when reviewing, then I probably meant every word as a constructive criticism and not an insult. I also look for people to do the same to my stuff so I can improve but not many do.
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- IRIDESCENT PIGLET - 01/25/2009
- hello. umm thanks 4 commenting and i read some of your poerty and its really good. NICE ^^
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- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 01/24/2009
- I read, rated, and commented all of your poetry, and have to say, I quite liked it. You do good work. Might I ask, are you a fan of Emilie Autumn?
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- mexicantacos2003 - 01/21/2009
- Overall, your poems are weak in structure, have little similes or metaphors, barely any imagery, many fragments, and above all, make very little sense. If I were you, I would go over most of the poems posted up and try to get the best lines from them and start from scratch using those lines.
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