The Sword of The Eternals Ch.1

• Artist: farthead0
• Description: A story about a powerful blade stolen from the Eternal Temple!
• Date: 07/16/2009
• Tags: sword eternals

In the small village of KoTaRu was a boy named Konnan. Konnan was not diffrent but he would make a big diffrence. Konnan was helping his mother in the kitchen when he heard a *BANG*.he went downstairs to check it out. He looked around but didnt see anything. maybe he was just hearing things. He walked up the stairs and heard another bang.So he went downstairs once more. He looked around and saw a little tail sticking out from behind the heater. he went over to the and saw a strange figure he couldnt make out. so he got closer and figured out what he saw. he was shocked! eek exclaim

Comments

[Aurore Gagnon]

I completely agree. Im not trying to be mean, BUT HOLY H*** THAT WAS LIKE 10 WORDS AND YOU WERE DONEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

[Winter Masquerade]

It could be better, I wasn't overly pleased. The emoticons, bad spelling and lack of capitalization took away from it, and that is far too short to be a chapter. I've seen short chapters, but that one takes the cake.