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lOVE NEVER MEANT ANYTHING TO ME IT WAS A WORD IN THE DICTIONARY AND A WORD PEOPLE WOULD SAY ALL THE TIME
I HATE IT BECAUSE A FEW DAYS LATER THEY ARE SAD AND LONELY AND TAKE THE WORD BACK BUT ONCE YOU HAVE SAID IT YOU CANT TAKE IT BACK...
I DONT KNOW WHAT YO DO I LIKE SOMEONE BUT I WANT TO SAY THE OTHER WORD AND THEN I CANT TAKE IT BACK IM SCARED I AM GOING TO TRY TO TELL HIM TOMMARROW DEC. 10, 2008 HOPFULLY HE SAYS IT BACKS AND MEANS IT...
MY HEART IS SAYING YOU DO
BUT MY MIND IS TELLING ME YOU DONT
- by Keir Yue_blackmoon_ |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/09/2008 |
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- Title: WHAT WILL U SAY
- Artist: Keir Yue_blackmoon_
- Description: WHAT IS THAT WORD THE WORD THAT MEANS SO MUCH BUT TO ME IT MEANS NOTHING I CAN TYPE IT BUT I CANT MEAN IT IF I DONT BELIEVE IN IT...
- Date: 12/09/2008
- Tags: will
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Comments (7 Comments)
- The Lazy Powm - 12/20/2008
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it would be very good if only the caps lock wasn't on. it makes it look as if you are not serious about it, as if you are bellowing it out with no rhythm.
check out my poems too plz! sorry about advertising for myself...it's kinda rude of me. - Report As Spam
- Cynical Violinist - 12/20/2008
- Good attempt at expression, but try working on punctuation, spelling, and grammar. Keep it up; I could feel your intensity in your words, even if you spelled some of them wrong.
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- retty383832 - 12/18/2008
- good try for expression work on spelling and punctuation
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- superemochick41 - 12/17/2008
- hey check out my poems ;p
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- 2 much mcdonalds - 12/15/2008
- oo tell me what he said!!!
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- nathanswenis - 12/13/2008
- hmm..
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- Unmaker 3 - 12/13/2008
- I'm with CuddleMe Kitty.
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