Life without you

• Artist: Schizophallic
• Description: This is a poem i wrote on how life is hard without the ones you love or the friends you miss,who have gone into the afterlife.
• Date: 07/18/2008
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Life without you is lik salt on a wond,
like a sick puppy that has been kicked around,
i miss you and allways will,
i will crie every night and day as i miss the people that was like my family,
thank you for the happyness and tinder love and care you gave me,
through this life,
i know youll be and are in a better place and cant wait to see you again,
please be strong in the hospital or up in heaven i will miss you all forever and more,
the happiest times and life i spent were with you all,
i hope you can forgive me for all the sadness i may have sometimes brought you,
and remember me for all the happyness i brought aswell.

Comments

[xoJesus-Loves-Youxo]

That is beautiful what you wrote i can relate to it myself, Great Job.

[Arkun]

I mean I know somone who can relate to it.

[Arkun]

It's a really beautiful poem.
I can't really relate to it, because none of my love ones have ever died/been hospitalized.
But I know someone who has.

Also, you made a few spelling errors.

[-_-Dinpuruzakemono77-_-]

i love this i can relate to this but i really love my family but i feel like my mom jst doesnt like me back... she called me selfish and i am not even selfish i care about alot of ppl. can u tell me if thats selfish??


but w/e

this is something ppl can relate too!! good job!

[Schizophallic]

Please leave meh a comment on my work id like to know what you think...