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death they allways say the person dies peacful
nobody dies peaceful they just die
your eyes dotn close when you die
your head doesnt slowly turn over
you just die
your muscles tighten
your muscles die
you cant move
you cant speak
you just die
your muscles become nothign but wheigt
when you touch the body
it feels like a stuffed deer
unmoveing , stiff
when you try to move it
you feel like it could eisly snap in half
- by Giantess_lover3 |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 09/12/2008 |
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- Title: Death
- Artist: Giantess_lover3
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Description:
a bit of light on the topic of death , no im not emo its just something i learned........the hard way.
but it tells me ill never be a detective. - Date: 09/12/2008
- Tags: death thetruth
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Comments (7 Comments)
- tha_bizness - 03/03/2009
- Awww dude......its own leash.....dude.....thats.......horrible...wow...that made me sad........... =****(
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- Gray_Archer - 12/25/2008
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nice poem
it has a way of telling what reality is.
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- refnegafadiag - 12/02/2008
- This is non-fiction. If you really did die and you are able to relate the experience of dying here, then you are probably a miracle of medicine. 1 star.
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- servant-death - 09/14/2008
- that's a pretty cool poem...
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- Grand Diable - 09/13/2008
- Great idea to share your emotions in a productive way sorry to here about you're pet though.
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- Blood Of a Demonic Angel - 09/12/2008
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i thats sad
ive lost so many people/pets dear to me i know how hard it is to lose a pet u love - Report As Spam
- Giantess_lover3 - 09/12/2008
- no im not emo i just wrote this after my pet dog died , it got tangled up in its own lesh. =;(
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