the angel i saw in my dream..

• Artist: cutieo_onatyx--
• Description: its about a guy who sees a beautiful girl in his dream and gets attached with her its a really nice story made by me ofcourse :3 >w<
  its short but read it anyway :3
• Date: 10/05/2008
• Tags: angel dream

One day he woke up with a smile ..a smile that was hardly ever seen on his pale face a smile that a dream was behinde it,a dream of a beautiful girl with an angelic face blue eyes,blonde hair,and lips as red as a rose, a girl that you can only see in your dreams.
and from that day whenever he thought about his dream,about that girl,that angel as he called her , his sadness turned into happiness, his frown turned into a smile even if had seen her just once, and tose who were curious to know why he was smiling..asked him
and his answer was always the same "ITS BECAUSE OF AN ANGEL I SAW IN MY DREAM".
THE END
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Comments

[icelestial_nightmare]

not bad... just fix up some errors. oherwise i <3 it =D

[SoMeOnEsPrciousA_n_G_e_L]

you made alot of errors in it like "and tose" "behinde" and ya dont forget that people like me see those things I give you a 1/5 sorry its just not that good nice try though dont give up even know these words are ruid and full of no hope

[starwing2009]

Angelic dreams lie in wait, healing and feeling for another gate. To the divine, and what lies therein, can you see that desire begin? Love of God and love of neighbor, who is this other stranger? Closer than any human person, a spiritual being of another 'dimension'-close to my heart, so close to me. Please help me God to see-this other being you have created, to guard and guide-not be rejected.

[zZz__muffinz__zZz]

its ok