i hate that i love you

• Artist: pom_pom_destruction
• Description: this man is a heart thief , a soul eater, and a cruel corps , luckally my friend stole it back
• Date: 11/29/2008
• Tags: hate love cold vampire

what do you take me for? ... oh who am i kidding you know what i am... a fool who is taken by your cold eyes.... you are like a poison , a toxen , a drug.... are you a male villa ? are you a being that came from the night of vampric power? or am i? i can feel your cold blood seeping from your neck , it flowing through my throught , it beeing like cool red wine on my lips ...
im not beautiful , and im not a person to let you in , but you you draw me in so easilly so effortlessly your body not flawless but your smile so perfect , your eyes cool like ice water and when the light hits your hair just right it shines unnaturally, waht are we? you draw away as i draw close? so discusted by me as i feel safe in your arms? am i a toxic watse in your eyes?

Comments

[CoffinCakes97]

holy shizz! can u give my bf some pointers. he tried making me a poem for v-day and it went something like this:
when im without you, i feel like a poo.
but when im with you i cant say i do.
have we kissed yet?
...yeah ill leave the rest out cuz its kinda vulgar past that point. -blush-

[Zee Tree]

Lovely. But, work on punctuation and capitalization. If you get those down, you could be a sucsessful poet. Overall it is a great and powerful story.

[Rian_Lena]

Amazing. Truly amazing.

[XxBLOOD_JAYxX]

Wow........ I am so speechless right now I'm not even joking. You made it an attention grabber and u were the first one today that caught my eye. Keep up the good work and you WILL be an author