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i walked into the school and everyone looked at me, they didn't talk to me
and they looked at me as an invisable person
an invisable person who no1 could see but they did look at me
i had a bad feeling
i cried
but no1 saw it because i am invisable
but why i ask
why did every1 looked at me and didn't saw me with my tears
they looked right through me and they discovered all my fears
- by systemshutdowwnn |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 04/24/2009 |
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- Title: invisable
- Artist: systemshutdowwnn
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- Date: 04/24/2009
- Tags: invisable
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Comments (4 Comments)
- iiGummi_Bears - 07/22/2009
- omg! im sorry i dont know how u feel cuz im popular
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- Memory Anthem - 07/14/2009
- o am sorry that this happend to you butt it does not rase your score
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- daantje33333 - 05/19/2009
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it is a nice poum and i am sorry for you that this happned but you can realy see that you are from the netherlands !
because like klaora already said the spelling is so bad!
and i saw your profilexD
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- Klaora - 05/14/2009
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I am terribly sorry for that, however, this makes very little sense, as you cannot see invisible people, now can you?
Please please please please correct spelling, punctuation, grammar, and make it proper. The message you are trying to portray will be much more effective that way.
Also, invisible is spelled with an 'i', not an 'a.'
Sorry, that was driving me crazy the entire time I read it. - Report As Spam
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