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Do you see the waves
Blowing gently in the wind
They look like slaves
Going and going untill the very end
- by piglet9876543210 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/30/2009 |
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- Title: Waves
- Artist: piglet9876543210
- Description: I just thought of it one day when i was at the beach
- Date: 05/30/2009
- Tags: waves
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Comments (7 Comments)
- RestrictMania - 01/24/2010
- i dont like the slave part... it shouldn't co-exist with the peacefulness of the waves.. but that is just my humble opinion
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- susanner - 12/20/2009
- that's a very unique description. awesome. not sure that waves blow in the wind, but it's worth working with.
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- x_Luna_Lilium_x - 12/19/2009
- coolness dude
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- Intimidates - 12/16/2009
- so peaceful...
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- sullen eclipse - 12/12/2009
- no.just no it sounds pretty but is just plain fail material
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- x_komal_x - 12/07/2009
- nice! but i'm not able to rate it?
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- BurningRoseAlive - 10/02/2009
- um...i think its too short and idont really understand that meaning........
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