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You are the hushed,
The secret, the kept,
How my heart was in silence swept.
You are the rhyme,
The tale, the word,
The voice that lingers though unheard.
You are the chain,
The master, the rule,
The snare that has captured a fool.
You are the wish,
The dream, the song,
The love that never quite belonged.
- by TinyButShiny |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/12/2009 |
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- Title: Longing
- Artist: TinyButShiny
- Description: O, the woes of unrequited love and the poetry that ensues! xD haha, this is dedicated to, ahem... This is a Valentine's day poem of sorts. It's a little gloomy though, and it's pretty short xD. Pardon me and my poetry noobness :).
- Date: 02/12/2009
- Tags: longing valentinesday love unrequited
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Ethomara - 03/20/2009
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I really liked it. smile
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- xx-luxa misery-xx - 03/16/2009
- considerably nice but yeah its in the wrong category xD
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- dee32693 - 02/25/2009
- i like the last stanza the best! xD not to say the rest sucked cuz it didnt! <3<3<3<3
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- TinyButShiny - 02/24/2009
- Actually I transferred it to poetry, and as I write it appears to be in that category o_o. Hmm.
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- -Deathly Destruction- - 02/24/2009
- You've published this in fiction when it should be in poetry!! *scolds you*
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- NoNo Nope - 02/22/2009
- wasn't this fiction?????? i hate poems thats why i am in fiction so 0 but have to give a 1
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- XCherrehCokeX3 - 02/18/2009
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GOOD PEOM!
buut the last line the rhyming seems a little forced! surprised
try ficing it up a bit by breaking it down!
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