Unwanted love

• Artist: Doomed Sex
• Description: A rap/poem, whatever you want to call it, wrote it when I was down, it won a contest worldwide and got published, just want to know what Gaia thinks.
• Date: 11/17/2008
• Tags: loved lovingless

Cause I'm so sick of makin the same wrong,
Saying I'll stay strong,
Saying I'll move on,
I'm ready to put my words to work,
Cause I'm sick of all the hurt,
Ending up with a face full of dirt,
Knuckles bloody red,
With a mind so cold,
And a heart so dead,
But then with a soul so bold,
I'm not going to give in no more,
I'm not going to fold,
I'm closing the door,
So much anger,
It's just a whole load,
Tired of the restless nights,
And the painful games,
I just wanted to be in sight,
And for you to remember my name,
Carve it on your arm,
Or tat it on your heart,
I'd tat it on mine,
But its broken apart,
You were the glue,
And you were the tape,
How did something so true,
Just have to break,

Comments

[Y u r a l r i a]

I like it, but I'm not really into sad poems so % for you chump

[Lady Leya]

Wow, very good!! 0_o
I see more as a poem though, it could be both though. Its really good! 5/5

[xx_icyheartbreak_xx]

omg i love it its amazing and i think it sound be a rap or a song too ^-^

[Sings_to_the_moon]

i loved it i imagined it as a rap smile

[ll W E i R D - G A S M ll]

i <33 it soo much!! make it a rap.. song..whatever turn it into music!!

ahahxD that was awesome [:

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[II_RAWR-KITTY-RAWR_II]

I love it almost made meh cry

[~dolphin27303~]

I really like your rap/poem. It express's so much anger and unhappy memories. It works for some people and others it doesn't. It works for you. Keep letting it out.