MY LUV 4 U.......... NOT!!

• Artist: redrosefire44
• Description: THIS IS SORTA LIKE A ROMANCE POEM BUT I ADDED TWISTS 2 IT 2 MAKE IT SEEM INTERESTING INSTEAD OF JUST SOME LAME OLD BORING LUV POEM
• Date: 11/09/2008
• Tags: love funny comedy rose poems

ROSES ARE RED, VIOLETS ARE BLUE,
SUGAR IS SWEET AND SO ARE YOU,
BUT THE ROSES ARE WILTING, THE VIOLETS ARE DEAD,
THE SUGAR BOWL'S EMPTY AND SO'S YOUR HEAD.

KIND, INTELLIGENT, AND HOT,
THIS DESCRIBES EVERYTHIN YOU ARE NOT.

OF LOVING BEAUTY YOU FLOAT WITH GRACE,
IF ONLY YOU COULD HIDE YOUR FACE.

I WANA FEEL YOUR SWEET EMBRACE,
BUT DONT TAKE THAT PAPER BAD OFF YOUR FACE.

I LOVE YOUR FACE, YOUR SMILE, YOUR EYES,
DAMN IM GOOD AT TELLING LIES! XD

I SEE YOUR FACE WHEN IM DREAMING,
AND THATS WHY I ALWAYS WAKE UP SCREAMING.

MY LOVE YOU TAKE MY BREATH AWAY,
WHAT HAVE YOU STEPPED INTO TO SMELL THIS WAY?

MY FEELINGS FOR YOU NO WORDS CAN TELL
EXCEPT FOR THE WORDS "GO 2 HELL"

DONT MESS WITH MY LIFE, IT'LL BE A CRIME
IF YOU DON'T LISTEN, WELL......YOU'LL JUST DIE.

Comments

[Echidnachimerax]

go to hell is 3 words

[Cutie Kumi]

its not that good...
u need need some fixing up to do^^"sry

[Plenty of Kandi]

u shouldn't care wat other people say about ur poem.... it's awsome!!!! X]

[cry all you want]

I agree 100% with the comment below me, Klaora-.

[Klaora]

I don't understand why this is in the spotlight. This has potential to be amazing but until you take the caps lock off, fix grammatical, spelling, and timing errors, I don't have much respect for it. Sorry. =/ My suggestion: re-write it so that a person with an English major doesn't cry.

[T3CHN0_W13RD0]

haha!!! thats a very awesome poem and funny at the same time! =] good job.

[purplemajic]

I absolutely love it!