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She hides behind her hair,
trying to hides those tears,
everyone’s laughing at her,
for no apparent reason,
she don’t get it,
what’d she do to them,
all they do is laugh,
is it her clothes,
her hair or teeth,
because it’s got to be what’s outside,
because if they knew what’s inside,
they would know,
she’s a nice girl,
who made some wrong choices,
she has some problems,
a really dark past,
everyone hates her,
even her dad,
her life is so sad,
and they make it worse,
by laughing and being mean,
maybe if they’d stop,
she'd stop wanting to die,
and maybe she would be happy.
- by a forgotten soul 13 |
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- | Submitted on 07/16/2008 |
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- Title: The Girl
- Artist: a forgotten soul 13
- Description: Sad poem, it's not that good, please comment.
- Date: 07/16/2008
- Tags: sadstory
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Sarpe_Drac - 07/16/2008
- This is really sad. It has, what could be an intresting story, but where you left it it seems too....plain..I suppose. You should add some better word choice and punctuation. Good start though!
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