Dear Cara

• Artist: Death for Wonderland
• Description: My friend Cara committed suicide about 2 months ago. This is a song I wrote in memory of her.
  R.I.P. Cara Weber.
• Date: 01/10/2009
• Tags: dear cara weber suicide song

Your life was short, playing lost and found,
Now you lay there, six feet underground,
Why’d you leave, Why’d you have to go,
My friend Cara, I miss you so,
You were my friend, you were so dear,
Now I’m still in shock, that you’re no longer here,

Dear Cara, You were so strong,
Dear Cara, But it didn’t last long,
Dear Cara, Couldn’t you see,
That all you needed was hope,
But now you've been set free.

Your friends are still here, crying over you,
Here we stand, there’s nothing we can do,
Why were you so selfish, to go that far,
To not let us help you, to bear your scars,
We want you back, wish you didn’t leave,
But all we can do, is sit here and grieve.

Dear Cara, You were so strong,
Dear Cara, But it didn’t last long,
Dear Cara, Couldn’t you see,
That all you needed was hope,
But now you've been set free.

You made me smile,
You stayed for a while,
But then you strayed,
And we're not okay.

Dear Cara, You were so strong,
Dear Cara, But it didn’t last long,
Dear Cara, Couldn’t you see,
That all you needed was hope,
But now you've been set free.

Dear Cara, You were so strong,
Dear Cara, But it didn’t last long,
Dear Cara, Couldn’t you see,
That all you needed was hope,
But now you've been set free.

Comments

[Waging]

I can tell how much you loved your friend from this, however I think more detail would help it, along with a more complex rhyme scheme...sorry for your loss. sad

[March Of Helios]

Clearly repetitive, but I respect the content :3
I almost think that the poem would be better off without the constant rhyming. Reading it just sounds very... Not sad lol... But it's a great poem overall :3

[Donutday]

That was good but the rhyme scheme seemed to detract a bit of the emotion from it.

[Friday Heart]

its okay but i think i have read sumtin like it

[millianth mile]

wow, that was amazing, I'm sure that someone could release that, and i'm really sorry to hear about that.

[Nurse Garland]

i thought it was very good, a tad bit redundant though

[Sayafire]

Wow...that was such a nicely written song. I know what it's like to lose a friend that way. I had a friend that commited suicide a few months ago. I'm sorry to hear about your friend.