Why Just A Friend?

• Artist: xXblack-lighteningXx
• Description: a short poem describing the turmoils in side u when u love a friend...but ur just invisible to them...
  constructive comments unly pls....
• Date: 01/11/2009
• Tags: just friend

Im so Tired Of Jus Bein the friend!
im so tired of jus bein who u come to
in the End!
I want something more,
I need to explore..
2 c if its right..u and me...
i don jus wanna be the one who consoles u...
i don jus wanna be the good guy friend...i want to be urs and 4 u to be mine.and girl...all i can say is that ur on my mind..

U constantly come seeking refuge in my words, and i, jus a fool give u all
without concern. I love u i need u!,
then y must U be stern,
in ur view of me as a friend!? i've been there 4 u, u've been there 4 me,and girl, u know that always, ur friend iwillll be! but...

i don jus wanna be the one who consoles u...
i don jus wanna be the good guy friend...i want to be urs and 4 u to be mine.and girl...all i can say is that ur on my mind..

Comments

[IGrunny xD]

Great Job biggrin something i would try adding some more rimes other then that 5/5

[xXblack-lighteningXx]

thanks Ash trap will do

[Moonlight_Maiden123]

*sigh* i hate luv...nice work

[Ash Trap]

I stopped reading after the first line. If you're going to write a poem, you'll probably have better reception if you bother to spell out words like "you" and "to" and "see." Proper punctuation might help too.