The End

• Artist: luv2laffness
• Description: i wrote this after my cousin committed suicide...
  
  :..(
  
  i was in a rather fragile emotional state at the time, so i would appreciate none to harsh comments.
  RIP
  Sophia
  You Are Loved
• Date: 01/20/2009
• Tags: suicide death

A man teeters at the edge of a skyscraper
a woman takes out more pills that should be taken,
a man readies a noose,
and a woman steadies a gun to her head,

none believing that they will die,
all thinking that they will live to see another sun rise
to do what they've been taught-
to finish what they've started

a jump,
a swallow,
a hanging,
and a pull of a trigger,

at the moment before theyre gone,
do they see,
that they won't be waking up,
that this isn't just a dream,
that it is their own personal ending.

an end
their end
the end

Comments

[ocant]

wow this poem made me think lol 5 out of 5 and sorry for your loss give my condlences

[Xlonely_tear_dropX]

this is... crying so true! why do ppl have to commit suicide!? crying i love your poem! i can feel ur pain even though no one i know has commited suicide.ur poem is deep and is expressed well and just wow 5/5 crying

[i_like_mi_pie]

interesting..in the best way possible..hehe

[XXS1MPLY_M3XX]

Wow,I'm really sorry to hear that..the pome is very..deep..if u will though