Dominion of Ice

• Artist: Adrilaxas
• Description: This was a poem that I more or less came up with on a snow day.
  If I had a reference image, I'd have used something like a cracked skull encased in ice, but I don't know exactly where I'd find it. =.=
  
  EDIT (9/29/09): I shifted around a lot of the lines and helped it flow better. also changed "corpse" tag to "colossus"
• Date: 02/15/2009
• Tags: cold dominion wasteland colossus

This is the Ice Giant:
A frozen Corpse of the once-blue skies,
It wraps its crackling shroud around the trees,
The rocks, the sleeping, both living and dead,
Hoping to break all, so that only still white is left.

Never slowing, never hasting,
Never docile, never raging,
Time, Space, and all manner of Being cease
Where this Colossus dwells.

From its victims it leaches fire and life,
Yet stays still, ever torpid, mummified,
Crystalline and impervious.
Out of reach of mortal hands,
It spreads Its mists of coldness and despair.

Comments

[Jackaroo091]

Wow! You are talented! Very ambitious 5/5

[Adrilaxas]

I really do want people to comment on this and point out any mistakes that I've made. neutral

[Adrilaxas]

Gah, I really wish the description could have been more than 500 letters. Hope everyone likes it!