The fall

• Artist: yanksforlife123
• Description: I look in her eyes and thats where it begins
  
  I fall for her and thats where it ends....
  
  I watch the leaves fall as she falls
  
  She is the one i know it
  
  How she strives makes winter chills
  
  The way she walks makes summer warm
  
  And all i want to say is "its ok.."
• Date: 03/17/2009
• Tags: fall

lol ok ya im not a poem dude so ya i threw words together and ya lol

Comments

[~1lucky1~]

thats really good! i'll give u 5/5 ^-^

[AFIrocksxx]

wow... i actually really like it! good job! ur really good at describing things in a different way... i really like it!