What kind of love?

• Artist: -XxThe Night ChildxX-
• Description: this is about my best friend when i was in third grade. i loved her alot, and then well...she is dead now.
• Date: 07/15/2008
• Tags: love ignorance

What kind of love
When a man commits rape
And that little girl dies
Because she couldn’t escape
What kind of love
When your child cries
And you don’t have the nerve
To look her in the eyes
What kind of love
When somebody dies
And you’re at the funeral
And you don’t cry
What kind of love
Do you have for me
I feel like im drowning
Out at sea

Comments

[Atheshya]

I like this one. Very sad subject matter, which is portrayed well in the poem. All the rhymes are unforced save for the last one - the last couple of lines in general seem out of place, actually. Asides from that, it's good enough to merit four stars.

[Qness]

that's beautiful, so unfortuntatly true to so many

[phuneral]

Thats a really good poem. But I think at the end you might have meant "sea" instead of "see".