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We live on front porches and swing life away
We get by just fine here on minimum wage
If love is a labor I'll slave 'til the end
I won't cross these streets until you hold my hand
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I feel.. unwanted.. Un-needed.. Uncared for...
Why Don't I just crawl under a rock and die?
Because I've met the love of my life...
And he promises to take care of me 'til the end..
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I long to hear you speaking to me..
Talking to me, Saying you love me.
This world can be quite cruel..
God, I wish he didn't leave me like this..
I Wish I could turn back time..
To.. To say that I loved him.. And hug him, Just once before he died...
- by User 10168067 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/15/2008 |
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- Title: Poems of Love
- Artist: User 10168067
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Description:
^_^; It's just a few poems I thought up. and i wanted to enter this arena o:
by the way: The first Poem thing is actually lyrics from Rise against: Swing life away - Date: 07/15/2008
- Tags: love poems heartbreak emotional
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Comments (7 Comments)
- XoX_Dreamless_XoX - 11/08/2010
- Wow, this is the best poem I have ever red! Excellent job. I'll give you 5 stars! Keep it up! :]]]
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- F A I L M O N S T E R - 09/05/2010
- i like the first one.
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- User 10168067 - 07/15/2008
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That isnt true darnit! T~T; nyah. LETS JUST STOP D:<
hi im kintari who're you? ^_^ *Has revised desc.* - Report As Spam
- blackjade1 - 07/15/2008
- If you had just given credit where it was due when you first posted that, I wouldn't have been critical. The fact that you then went it said I was just hating and you'd never heard of the words before is just silly. Either you already knew they didn't belong to you or you just don't want to bother and then gave credit. Own it either way.
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- User 10168067 - 07/15/2008
- D: I findeded(Yay improper writing~) that comment somewhat rude. . and by the way, I just wanted a rhyme in that comment. o_o;
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- blackjade1 - 07/15/2008
- First of all, it's not hate I'm bring to your door. It's honesty. If you haven't heard that song before, then you're a medium because your channeling the song lyrics verbatim according to several lyrics sites. Because, unlike you it seems, I checked the words before I wrote my own. If you haven't heard of the band then you can check out their official site www.riseagainst.com . They have a video of the song you seem to have mystically connected with your poetic mind.
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- User 10168067 - 07/15/2008
- D: Whatever.. bring on the silver-plated hate. <3
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