Beauty Saddened

• Artist: wordswithoutmercy
• Description: A poem written from deep within the heart, filled with passion from a once lonely soul wondering in this desolate world of chaos and confusion.
• Date: 07/15/2008
• Tags: beautysaddenedheartfeltpoetry

A beauty so fragile,
hangs her head low.
As all the others laugh and smile,
she screams and cries,
wishing for this pain to end.
As the sadness overcomes her,
she becomes chained,
a chained angel destined to a life of solitude.
She longs for freedom,
she longs to be loved.
But nobody cares about a mere chained angel,
they all just laugh and point fingers,
acting as if she is worthless,
as if her existence means nothing.
But why,
why must they torture her so?
Why must they hate a beauty saddened by this world?

Comments

[Kigaru_ECP]

This poem is so beautiful and I can totally understand the emotion of it. Of feeling alone and trapped and wishing you could just be free of it all.

[Atheshya]

I like what you have, but it does need more imagery. I suggust showing us what the angel looks like. Does she have wings? If so, mention it. Really make the audience see the image you're trying to portray. Still, a good effort - three stars.

[REDcryptid]

How sad. This happens. I hate seeing this sight of children ganging up on one. It's reched.