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It’s like I’m in a darkness
A cloud of storms and rain
It’s like a constant gloom of pain
A fierce and wild hurricane
It’s like a flood of sadness
The tears overcome my soul
It’s insanity and madness
As my emotions take a hold
It’s like an afflicted disease
No medicine there to ease
Nothing left to cure my needs
From this incurable horrible seize
It’s like an impairing blindness
Scales upon my eyes
It’s like a deadly heart attack
Taking me by surprise
It’s like a rollercoaster high
At the deathly heights above the sky
It’s being unprepared to take that plunge
Yet falling downward with a lunge
It’s like an earthquake
My world ‘s been shaken upside down
It’s like I’m in the twilight zone
And know you’ve gone,-- you’re not around
It’s all these horrors all these fears
A piercing knife a sharpened spear
It’s how I felt the day you died
A sting and stab leaving grief behind
- Title: It's like...
- Artist: Angeladr7
- Description: The words to this poem came to me out of no where. It is not a feeling I have actually recently experienced, but it is through the eyes of a person who is dealing with the lost of a loved one.
- Date: 07/15/2008
- Tags: sadness death lostlovedone
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Comments (5 Comments)
- angelmonkey10 V2 - 02/01/2009
- I really love this poem. You did really well. I give it a 5...
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- Miss Salsa Sam - 01/01/2009
- this is the kind of my favourite poems. You can tell it was writen with passion and emotion and thank you for that. Blackmage151 I acually disagree with you althought she repeated, it was only her rymes and thats the way it should be. She made sence because she said what was happening at the end.
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- Jeyrin - 12/14/2008
- really good!
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- La Cerise Noire - 07/15/2008
- it's pretty good!
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- blackmage151 - 07/15/2008
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its ok but it needs to make more sense plus after the third phrase it started to get repetitive
p.s. mix i up a bit - Report As Spam
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