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Her eyes,
An endless sea filled with ice and hate.
Her whispers,
Winds traveling across the land, far and wide, with tales of sorrow, tragedy and love.
Her hair,
A dark mane only fit for an unloving goddess.
Her heart,
A dark and deep sea, all lost, all forgotten. A dead end.
Her love,
Gold passed from man to man but with her it's only a token of gratitude for a short moment.
Her,
A goddess who knows no love or compassion. She is the deliverer of sorrow and pity.
A dream,
My mind clouded with her even in my slumber.
Confusion,
That's all this is.
- by c0mbatfrogz |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/15/2008 |
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- Title: The Girl
- Artist: c0mbatfrogz
- Description: A poem, I wrote in 2007.
- Date: 07/15/2008
- Tags: puppyloveunforunatesadhateforever
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Moonlight_Maiden123 - 01/25/2009
- wow the description, the pattern, and the theme itself was amazing.
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- Blankspace2 - 01/07/2009
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I rather like it. I think the descriptions were actually really well written.
I'm sorry about your heartache though. - Report As Spam
- c0mbatfrogz - 07/15/2008
- I suppose you don't know why since you didn't explain what was wrong with the descriptions. And yes, I know it sucks.
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- sarahmay1235 - 07/15/2008
- I'm sorry she broke your heart but this poem sucks. You have a nice idea, describing things about her, but the discriptions themselves need a lot of work.
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- c0mbatfrogz - 07/15/2008
- I was with her for nine months...
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- Xx Toxic Malice xX - 07/15/2008
- This poem is very sweet. It sounds that you love her but she doesn't love youback. She sounds so sad. How long were you with her?
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