The Pack of Wolves

• Artist: SomeAnotherDay
• Description: In english class we were told to write a poem about bullying from the third-person point of veiw, writing about both sides, with a metaphor, had to be in stanzas with at least one couplet. Also had to be a metaphor
  (Our teacher hated us)
  I couldn't figure anything until I dreamed about it and woke up at 3:00am and wrote this down. I compared Bullies to a pack of wolves
• Date: 07/15/2008
• Tags: bullying wolves school metaphors

They're always running,
Always hidin'
From the animals,
They'll be cryin'

Just trying to survive the jungle,
But nothing can stop this struggle.

He will tease his chosen prey,
Then Pounce!
Without a say.
Then he will call the pack,
They'll always have his back.

After they have their share,
After they've had their fill,
After the heart is in peices,
They'll leave without the bill.

But what happened to the prey?
He is hurt, and hearts start to devide.
Can't tell his secret inside,
Can he stand up?
Has he had enough?

Comments

[Sasuke-Kun 234]

thats very good and its organized well 5/5

[Chrimson Butterfly]

this is cool Great metaphor 5/5 I hope you got an A

[SomeAnotherDay]

thx smile

[Taitoca]

Great comparison! And awesome metaphor!