would you

• Artist: shadow warrior222
• Description: its just a short peom i wrote its really short but then again so are all mine
• Date: 07/15/2008
• Tags: shadowwarrior222peomwouldyou

if i said i had a gun and i was gunna kill myself
would you come and convince me to lay the gun on the shelf
or would you let me travel to the reapers land
only to embrace the devils hand

if i said i had a noose around my neck
would you save me and show me iam worth the effort to protect
or would you leave me
and let me drown in my own agony

if i put some poisen to my lips
would you stop me before i took a sip
or would you let me die
and if i did would you shed a tear would u cry?

Comments

[kannazs]

Yup its like the last one of many on LFC.

[SilvertongueSagittarius]

i wouldnt. dude, if i hadnt just gone through about nine million emo poems, i might have enjoyed this

[shadow warrior222]

so have u read this one kanna ? and thanks for the comments ppls

[kannazs]

It is a really good poem, as I have said before.

[Angeladr7]

Aw, some of the best poems are short. For instance this one! This poem really shows a great comparison of what a true loved one would do in order to save and protect someone, even if it's protecting them from themselves.

[Evanescing moon]

I hate it but in a good way meaning I like it cuzz a few of my friends are like what you describe and that's what I don't like... you did good except for a few errors 4/5

[shadow warrior222]

oh damn i thought i got rid of all the u's