Pain

• Artist: ODLIDANREF_3oh3b3b
• Description: This was written when my very first relationship ended. After i found the only reason why it ended, I felt even worse.
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: painlove

Why treat me this way?
I really loved you
I know you sed you're sorry
but how do I know what you say is true?

Im so confused right now
My heart is in two
My head keeps on spinning
and i don't know what to do

You said you care about me
Now part of me died
I said the same thing
but now i feel like you lied

You have no idea how i feel
I've been through a lot
Everything has changed
and you're not what i thought

I though i saw an Angel
Then that Angel left me
It changed my whole life
I'm not what I used to be

I try to go back
but that's very hard to do
I'll never be the same again
and it's all because of you

So to anyone who reads this
If you take a look at me
I might not seem all that sad
but don't believe everything you see.....

Comments

[P i lo t S l]

Aww I just broke up >: and it was the same thing....and he was my first bf too...

[Fredella]

this is really sad, but yet!
it's really good and inspiring
5/5

[xxblah_girlxx]

Hawwww I reckon it's really good! I like how the rhyming adds to the effect. Nice rhythm. But yeah you could've done with some proofreading ^.^

[Dreadful Stranger]

wow....many love ones on here.... X_X ......
way to much love ones on here >.>

[Bane Ad Vitam]

It's alright, but there isn't much rhythm to it, and, like you said, you should have done some proof reading.

[ODLIDANREF_3oh3b3b]

gaah!!..i forgot the letter "t" in thought..man..i shulda double checked..