Let it storm

• Artist: Grogert331
• Description: It's a poem i wrote a long time ago. It's kinda about a storm. i wrote it when i was sad or just wanted to be alone for a little while. the poem itself is pretty short. so any constructive criticism, or just general comments would be great!
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: storm poetry short rain sadness

Let it rain, Let it pour

Let there be clouds as dark as the ocean floor

Let it rain, Let it pour

Let the winds howl like never heard before

Let it rain, Let it pour

Let there be floods high above the attic doors

Let it rain, Let it pour

Let it storm for an eternity and more

Comments

[W i c k e cl]

you shoulda added something about lighting. and about thunder to make it longer, that wouldve been nice. but since its so short 3/5. but its still really good. read mine ? ( sswallowed by the sea) or ( a place in my heart)

[Kayne Kuragi]

4/5 cuz it's short. I like it though.

[Grusius]

short easy and good 4/5

[Fredella]

it's really good
but i think that it would be better if you put in something more about life

[xPrincessObliviousx]

I love it. It's amazing, and I just don't know how to describe it. But it's good. LOL