The Worst Flirt Ever

• Artist: Killing Pie
• Description: i once tried to flirt with a girl i had a crush on so i wrote a poem about how much it sucked being shy when it came to flirting
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: loveflirtingother

This is the poem i tried but it got me slaped cause she hated it.

O how long I try not to get lost in your eyes
but the more i look the more and more the seconds go bye,
seconds to minutes, minutes to hours,
and the longer I look the the more i think about jumping from towers,
if I can not be with you,
so little, so few know what its like to be with you,
I hope you know we share a lot in common like caring about others,
others care about themselves nothing like brothers,
now that I have said this I wish you understand,
that I would set sail to the end of the world just for your hand.

Comments

[Shadow.Of.Venca]

It's a good poem, my friend. Sometimes there are people who don't appreciate what a poem can stand for, and, sadly, that happened to you. I think you should keep it up, though. You really manage to convey a sense of love. Good job.

[Casca 7]

haha, i'm so sorry. i wouldn't have slapped you over it even though it may have sounded a bit cheesy to her. i wish more guys wrote poetry even if it does sound like a cliche italian poem. this is adorable and tender. keep writing, and you'll find someone to replace that slap with a kiss.

[xianeza]

its okay..

[Copperhead Snakecharmer]

i luved it, it doesn't deserve a slap! if a guy gave me a poem or anything, i would totly luv it! poor u, u wrote the right poem, to the wrong type of girl. she probly just doesn't like poems...T.T

[Angeladr7]

A shame she slapped you over it. I would like if a guy would write me a poem. Maybe beause I share that lvoe in writing poetry. It was good though. Maybe she misunderstood it!

[AureliaTurner22]

i liked it! i wonder y she didnt??